i made in ms paint personally i like it what do you think?My Pic

It's good for your first try but, you should use photoshop or gimp to make art like this. then head over to planetrenders.net they have great tutorials

For paint, that is amazing. But try harder on the text. I make all my paint text with brush or line.

thank you but it really isn't much all i did was take two renders add some filling inand select where i wanted them and added text lol